Hook: catch the reader’s attention.
Can you survive in the wilderness and most animals want to steal your food and kill you?
Would you eat everything that seems like food?
How would you survive with a hatchet and yourself?
Thesis statement: tells what you are going to talk about
The setting has to be hard but not impossible and it’s not easy, it’s dangerous but not super deadly, it’s cold but not bellow -50 c.
Details: the details of the thesis statement
It has to be summer time so he can survive also it has to be rasp berries season and fish season.
It has to be in a lake because he could have crashed on a tree and died or survived but without water.
The setting in Hatchet is very important. For example if it was winter he might die of cold or by a sickness. Maybe most animals might be hibernating and the birds would fly away and the lake may freeze. Also if he would have not landed on the lake he might have food but no water and my die by thirst or if he landed in Alaska he would have died just when he got out of the plane or not find any food to eat.
The setting also allows Brian to have advantages. For example he can make a fire because it’s not wet. He can get raspberries because its raspberry season. The problem is that there’s other animals competing for the food and there a storms and tornadoes. If the tornado had never came he perhaps would have stayed there forever because he wouldn’t want to get the survival kit and turn on the emergency transmitter and never get rescued. It was Brian throwing the hatchet that discovered that the solution for making a fire.
If there were raspberries he would have starved because he would be weak and he would not have enough strength to catch a fish or to think about making a bow. Another example is that, Brian might crash on a house and maybe the plane might have exploded. Or he could have landed on the airport and get arrested because they think Brian actually killed the pilot.
The setting has to be hard but not impossible and it’s not easy. If not then it would have been a boring story. It’s dangerous but not super deadly, it’s cold but not bellow -50 c.
I think that I was correct that the setting was important because if he would have landed somewhere else the book would be very different. That’s why the setting is important every piece of the recipe is important even the ones that seem not important they are super important.
Can you survive in the wilderness and most animals want to steal your food and kill you?
Would you eat everything that seems like food?
How would you survive with a hatchet and yourself?
Thesis statement: tells what you are going to talk about
The setting has to be hard but not impossible and it’s not easy, it’s dangerous but not super deadly, it’s cold but not bellow -50 c.
Details: the details of the thesis statement
It has to be summer time so he can survive also it has to be rasp berries season and fish season.
It has to be in a lake because he could have crashed on a tree and died or survived but without water.
The setting in Hatchet is very important. For example if it was winter he might die of cold or by a sickness. Maybe most animals might be hibernating and the birds would fly away and the lake may freeze. Also if he would have not landed on the lake he might have food but no water and my die by thirst or if he landed in Alaska he would have died just when he got out of the plane or not find any food to eat.
The setting also allows Brian to have advantages. For example he can make a fire because it’s not wet. He can get raspberries because its raspberry season. The problem is that there’s other animals competing for the food and there a storms and tornadoes. If the tornado had never came he perhaps would have stayed there forever because he wouldn’t want to get the survival kit and turn on the emergency transmitter and never get rescued. It was Brian throwing the hatchet that discovered that the solution for making a fire.
If there were raspberries he would have starved because he would be weak and he would not have enough strength to catch a fish or to think about making a bow. Another example is that, Brian might crash on a house and maybe the plane might have exploded. Or he could have landed on the airport and get arrested because they think Brian actually killed the pilot.
The setting has to be hard but not impossible and it’s not easy. If not then it would have been a boring story. It’s dangerous but not super deadly, it’s cold but not bellow -50 c.
I think that I was correct that the setting was important because if he would have landed somewhere else the book would be very different. That’s why the setting is important every piece of the recipe is important even the ones that seem not important they are super important.